Hey folks! Today we will be a little more technically oriented, using two emails that ended up in Jeremy’s inbox. Here they are, enjoy!
Email 1:
Subject: Co-Promotion Opportunity
Follow up:
Email 2:
SUBJECT: Alooma x {!company}
BODY:
Hi {!first_name},
Hope you don’t mind me reaching out!
I was hoping to connect because we’ve helped similar online communities (Redbubble) cut the time and cost associated with extracting data, transforming it, and loading it into your data warehouse, all in real time.
I would LOVE to start a conversation with {!company} to share how we are helping these companies, understand what challenges you may be experiencing with you current ETL solution, and see if we can be helpful.
What would your thoughts be on a purely exploratory call to determine if Alooma can add value?
Thanks!
John Doe
Alooma
www.alooma.com/live
2114 Broadway St.
Redwood City, CA 94063
Follow up:
SUBJECT: Re Alooma x {!company}
BODY:
Hi {!first_name},
Happy Friday!!
Thought you might be interested in this view of our real-time data stream (see below). Similar companies are utilizing Alooma to move their data into their data warehouse.
Are you open to learning more about Alooma and our capabilities?
Thanks!
John Doe
Alooma
2114 Broadway St.
Redwood City, CA 94063
www.alooma.com/live
AND LET’S HEAR THE TEARDOWN:
We hope this cast brings a lot on how to best approach some of the cold emails, especially if you are trying to sell a service, and how to differentiate it from other kinds of cold email. Following some of advice can add more good clients to your pipeline.
Happy cold emailing!
Jeremy and Jack
OTHER TEARDOWN EPISODES:
- Episode #091 – Teardown: Case Study on Improving Personalization
- Episode #077 – Teardown: Key Takeaways from Good, Bad And Ugly Cold Emails
- Episode #069 – Teardown: Go-2-Market, Nigerian Prince & Link Building Cold Emails
- Episode #061 – 4-part Email Teardown: How to Get a Reply from Jeremy
- Episode #057 – Teardown: Monkeylearn
- Episode #053 – Teardown: Contact Form Outreach
- Episode #048 – Teardown: Wins, Missed Opportunities and Pitfalls to Avoid
- Episode #038 – Cold Recruitment Email Teardown
- Episode #025 – Email Teardown
- Episode #014 – Email Teardown: Snype.io
- Episode #011 – Email Teardown: Casewave
- Episode #004 – Email Teardown: Skillshare
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